Monday, October 7, 2019

Spot the Differences, Part 2

In the images below, spot the differences between the right-hand side of the original painting as it appeared when first cut (on left) and that same piece once completed (on right):

     

6 comments:

carol edan said...

Color brighter.. maybe photographic
Simplified grasses
More sky
Generally a cooler look
Changed and simplified shapes on the bottom
Red weeds make a strong focal point
WOW!

dotty seiter: now playing said...

Carol! Thank you for these noticings. I feel like I just went to workshop with you—awesome!

carol edan said...

Wish you could!

dotty seiter: now playing said...

my wish, too!

Lola (Jen Jovan) said...

color, texture, line and shape - additional darks, maybe? All the changes are subtle but the overall effect is movement and luring the eye to the red grasses. Masterful!

dotty seiter: now playing said...

Jen, thanks for the feedback re movement and luring the eye to the red grasses. Movement: yes! Focal point: yes! Woo hoo!

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