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Ways Things Unfold / August 21, 2026

 August 21, 2026

Ways Things Unfold

passeggiata, narrows road
              —incongruous, improbable, and yet

post-dinner we stroll
the gravelly unpaved lane
past moosewood, hemlock,

bunchberry, damp logs,
moss, soft cross-hatched pine needles,
ferns, and leaf litter.

then we stand
                          stock still:
majestic, life-sized, sculpted
elephants!

just like that we’re touched
by hushed holy dignity.
pachyderms. ayuh.

—dotty seiter

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• “passeggiata” is a stack of 4 haiku, one stanza of which intentionally disrupts the traditional line arrangement and syllable count.
• Packed into this teeny bit of paper real estate is the Powerful Experience of stepping into the deep stillness always available within, first beside Norton Pond in June letting everything fall away to absorb myself in all the small movements and micro-decisions involved in painting, and then at home in July giving myself moments of solitude to focus on further small movements and micro-decisions tucked within the happy hearty hullabaloo of two weeks of family reunion.

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9 responses to “Ways Things Unfold”

  1. Always nice to find natural sculptures! What a pleasant walk!

    just like that we’re touched
    by hushed holy dignity.
    pachyderms. ayuh.

    Love your squares it hard to realize that they are so small… Love your finding different messages!

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    1. The surprise and majesty of those sculpted elephants packed a powerful punch of internal wonder. We researched them and discovered they were private purchases from an international initiative called The Great Elephant Migration, a herd of which is actually now on Commonwealth Ave in Boston : )

      Thank you for highlighting the final stanza of my poem.

      My paper tiles are indeed tiny! It has been a pleasure to have them be a key project in summer 2026.

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      1. Wish I could be in Boston! Did you see them at Quinn house?

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        1. We may go into the city this weekend.

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          1. I want to magically go with you!

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  2. Wow…what incredible sculptures to happen upon! I love the subtitle: incongruous, improbable, and yet! I think those moments when the “and yet” happens….are pure magic.

    I continue to love the stillness within these precious tiles and your poetic description of how they unfold.

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    1. MaryAnn, you are echoing the pure magic of my experience! We were in such an entirely Maine setting, with a little edge to the experience b/c we weren’t sure how “private” this private dirt road might be. Then, in a blink, Maine and private road vanished, and there we were with two mother and calf elephant dyads!

      Thank you for loving the stillness within that resides in these paper tiles and for appreciating my descriptions of their unfolding.

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  3. Even your description of your creations is poetic:happy hearty hullabaloo 

    I cannot help but smile! Your words take me there, to that moment. That incredible unexpected sight! Holy WOW! And a gorgeous piece of living art to top it all off. I feel like I had an otherworldly experience just reading your blog! xoxo

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  4. golly, shucks, Lola—thank you! Happy hearty hullabaloo, how could I resist? I can still remember in 3rd or 4th grade having to draw a map of an imaginary island and give island and locations names. My dad took that as an opportunity to teach me alliteration. Tallyho Tavern! Pirate’s Pinnacle! Horatio Hatch Hill! Was he a great dad or WHAT?!

    Coming upon those elephants: SUCH a moment of wonder!

    Thank you always for your surges of support and empowering encouragement!

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