Monday, February 8, 2021

More Sweet Chaos

Activating Canvases

This, then, just before five a.m.—

Like confectioner's sugar

sifted lightly on gingerbread,

a dusting of snow on the ground.

I am the first 

to walk my street.

Well, the first in shoes.

Unobserved earlier, a rabbit

has tracked up the gessoed canvas

of our driveway to

pass between the corner

of the garage and the corner

of the back deck.

Another left the safety

of Dale's leafless raspberry canes

to dart across Prospect Street

for the safety 

of the leafless canes 

of our red-twig dogwood shrub.

So, too, no one observed 

the cluster of deer who

ignored social distancing

guidelines to walk flank to flank

up and down the length 

of our hushed street 

before I stepped outdoors

into the velvet dark of predawn

to make my own Thursday morning story

with quiet marks.


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Later the same day I head to my studio for some indoor mark-making using paint, ink, and collage. Four new chaos layers ready to play with.









6 comments:

Simone said...

I'm deeply moved by your morning poem. Thanks for that! (And love the marks!)

dotty seiter: now playing said...

Simone, so happy to know you are moved by my morning poem. And that you love the marks —— as do I : )

Lola (Jen Jovan) said...

Oh my....I read and read and re-read your poem. Standing there, in the early morning, watching the landscape canvas become activated. Absolutely beautiful - a word-painting of the most amazing kind.

dotty seiter: now playing said...

Jen, thanks for stepping right into the word-painting of early morning with me. It was such a sweet experience, that early morning, and such a gift to carry it into my day in my heart and then re-create it in words : )

Sheila said...

LOVE your words, the images they place in my mind. The last three lines. Each beautiful messy square. The term chaos layers. Good term!! That I can just make out a furry creature hiding, camouflaged in the spotty landscape. LOVE! :)

dotty seiter: now playing said...

ooo —— furry creature hiding in the spotty landscape! Thanks for joining and enjoying the chaos layers and both verbal and visual here, Sheila.

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